I have no idea, really, what the hell this is. I must have been possessed by my darker side, but it does have a happy ending, kind of…you’ll see. 😉
It was a tragic kind of love,
poetic…forlorn,
fragmented memories,
from a long time ago.
His voice,
like a stinging wind
stealing my breath,
as I tremble in fear.
He strikes,
with forked tongue
jabbing my heart,
and furious fists
crack cartilage and bone,
then a light,
A blinding yet brilliant light,
fills me with warmth,
as I start to drift home,
to Eternity,
where I belong.
No need to shed a tear for me.
I’m safe now.
I’m free.
Hi, it’s RJ from (silverscreenshadowplay.wordpress.com) I personally dig your poem! It has a wonderful vibe of brilliance, melancholy, and Forlorn sadness! It’s Totally worthy… don’t make excuses for you art or your feelings for that matter! If ur interested, I have some of my own amateur artwork and poetry on my Horror Film Blog! It’s all under my Artwork Tag at the bottom of my page.:)
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Awesome! I’m looking forward to checking it out. Thank you for the kind praise. I appreciate that. 😉 Now, I’m going to check out your blog. I just love horror films.
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I thought the ending was darker than the rest of the poem. But I loved the piece
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Thank you, Nitin. Happy New Year! 🙂
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Great piece 🙂
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on a side note I think you should post more poems in here 🙂
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I’m going to start experimenting with some things so, I just may.
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Good 🙂
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